Evaluation

I have finished editing my final Aquapax video. Please see below:

I think it was a good idea to reshoot everything. I have managed to change everything I didn't like about the original one and the changes that the client wanted...

I have changed;

• The overall colouring of the piece - A much brighter, bluer white. It is a more consistent colour the whole way through.


• The colour of my top to fit in with the Aquapax branding - A bright blue. I also made such I was wearing long sleeves as some feedback I got off other people was that when the camera pans behind my back it looks as if its not the same person as the one making the Origami.


• The text at the end to lowercase.


• The font and colour of the end text.


• The wording of the end text to what the client preferred.


• I have cut the whole thing down a lot, it is now 32 seconds rather than 48.


• I have left the Origami in shot at the end but I have also left a pile of paper underneath as I really liked this shot.


• The Aquapax logo to the one the client prefered.


• Sped the pan around the back up.


• Sped the whole thing up in general.


• Made the whole piece a lot choppier, as I shot the same thing a few times using several different angles and depths.

Overall I am happy with my video. I really like my idea and glad that I managed to have a practise run to start with. I think with better cameras and lighting it couyld be a lot better though, I think it could be a lot crisper - More like an Apple commericial although I think I have suceeded in bringing my idea accross with the equipment available to me.