Changes...

I have changed the cover (homepage) to show a lot more 'scrapbook' elements. I have included the default characters and various 'cut out' elements from the story itself. This gives the viewer more of a feel of whats inside without showing to much of an actual layout... I have changed the text on all pages to a larger size. I have made a settings button rather than a homepage button, this will give the viewer a chance to go to the homepage too.
I have changed the artwork so that the characters stand out from the backgrounds, I have changed the opacities and colours on various layers to play around with the depth of field.

I have added something behind the sweet house rather than keeping it just white. I have added elements from inside the house that appear later in the story so the viewer gets hints of whats to come...
I've changed the 'cleaning' page to clean up the mess and leave the house behind it rather than be plain white.