Feedback from showing my storyboards in crit...
- Change the cover - Why are the items all at the bottom? Make more interesting by maybe adding the characters to the cover?
- Make the font bigger on all pages of the story
- Change the opacity in various layers in the artwork to make the characters stand out
- Make the prompts more apparent - Even by changing the font to something other than what the story text is written in
- Access settings from every page - No need for a home button - Maybe just a settings tab?
- See inside the house as the sweets disappear - Maybe the witch inside or something?
- Cleaning page - Change the white to a clean version of the house?
- Add more movement? Maybe animate some scenes with no interactivity?
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